幸山 -sakiyama- Chapter 3: Unexpected Effects

Author’s Note: After a bunch of months, I return with the third chapter of sakiyama! This chapter was supposed to be longer, but after reading beta reader Noeybody’s feedback, I decided to rewrite it and go with a different way of telling this story! I think you’ll notice what I mean if you check my blurb for sakiyama.

Also, I’d like to thank Pri for her illustrations again, as well as her beta reading for this chapter! Special mention also goes to her rephrasings! And speaking of feedback, honest constructive feedback is highly encouraged and will be highly appreciated!

Now, here’s the next chapter of sakiyama! Also, mature guidance is advised while reading this, especially if you’re under the age of 17, yo.

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幸山 -sakiyama- Chapter 2: Routine Changes

Author’s Note: Pat your own back, Tobby, ’cause you’ve made an update for this series! And Gogopria friend of mine, made character designs and covers for this story and its chapters too! I guess she’s gonna be this story’s illustrator, then? Well, as long as she’s willing, I’m okay with her drawing for this story, yo!

Also, 10k+ words in a single chapter…wait, hold on, length shouldn’t be the most important thing in writing stories, ’cause nobody will like length without substance, yo! And again, dear readers, I highly encourage and appreciate honest constructive feedback!

Now, here’s the next chapter of sakiyama! Also, mature guidance is advised while reading this, especially if you’re under the age of 17, yo. Continue reading

幸山 -sakiyama- – Chapter 1: Golden Opportunities

Author’s Note: What, you’re starting another series, Tobby? Oh well, don’t force yourself to do the posted ones if you’re not up to it…and hey, make sure to be more active in gathering feedback, yo.

So yeah, I’m having a hard time working on new oneshots and updating ongoing series ’cause of a bunch of things that are bothering me. Laziness, irrational fears, lack of sleep, excessive and unnecessary worrying…I’ll just leave it at that for now. I should talk about them more with my parents and with my close friends….

Now then, dear nutshellcrackers, here’s something that I wrote a bunch of months ago. And I haven’t even written the next chapters yet. I’ll try to work on the next chapter, still, but I think it would be better if I got a bunch of feedback before writing the next chapter.

Anyway, here’s the story, yo. And please leave your feedback in the comments section. Also, mature guidance is advised while reading this, especially if you’re under the age of 17, yo. Continue reading